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Something always brings me back
To a place
Where dreams are manufactured,

I live in this fragmented space,
Almost every single day,
My understanding is not whole,
Nor will it ever be.

These feelings swim
In the same pool
As our instincts,
We know without
Formerly being told.

But what is becoming clear:
Is without some kind of love,
God or reality does not exist,
And we do not live with our souls,
But with the limitations of
Our mortal minds.
This is a reflection and epiphany. These things never come to me when I sit down to try and understand them. They come unexpected.
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012   Writer
it's all true - there is no knowledge or experience worth accumulating without someone to love. that's no dime store romance novel witticism; it's the truth borne from living. very impressive the way you explicate the deeper meanings. :heart:
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aww :hug: you make me feel like a poet :blush:
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Cobalt358 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
sounds like auto-meditation. it happens to me sometimes too when i paint. it's nice when things fall into place like this with very little effort.
the last bit reminds me of a conversation i had with someone also trying to find the importance of connectedness. i think i came to a very similar conclusion. as conscious beings we need others to verify our existence. if we existed totally alone with no contact with another consciousness like ourselves, an "other" to have empathy for i don't think we could ever truly connect with reality. like if we lived our lives alseep and dreaming would we even know the difference if we woke up, we can't pinch ourselves to know we are awake, we need someone else to do that. i hope that made sense, lol, just something your poem made me think of.
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes - a lot like an auto-meditation...it's always in us...it's always there...waiting...like a weird deja vu.
Yes - connectedness. I really enjoy your thoughts that relate to my stuff - it solidifies and adds to my own thoughts :heart:
Thank you, Matt.
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truelightwarrior Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love 'channeled writings' like this, because they tell us the most about what we know about ourselves.. and all the things we never knew - we knew.
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: thankyou so much. You are so right :heart:
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iamPoetry Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful.
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, dear x
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