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I'm estranged from the core,
A wildly delicate distillation –
I try to relieve the pressure
With miniature prayer books,
Yesterday I even bought a Madonna and bambino
To share my grief –
My haughtiness snuffed
From me.

The fireworks are fading in my memory,
Seasickness overwhelms,
As if drunk on stellate angels
Or beautiful men that resemble them
After wine on wine,
And always
With those plastic bones
That melt,
Me(lt).

If I could pulverise your dreams
And add them to my moisturiser creams,
Pour them into precious gallipots,
As if a crypt for your ashes
And never ever
Touch them,
And never ever
Touch,
Except for holy conversations
Until I die,
Until I'm dead.
I'm a bit drunk and a bit sad right now...I think I'm coming down from crazy partying since before the new year :/
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
Shane, as he does so frequently, seems to have found the apt phrase. Excellently done, Natalie!
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: thank you so much :heart:
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JStavridis Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Your poetry leaves me quite speechless tonight, Miss.
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh my! :heart: Thankyou, J.
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JStavridis Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Professional Filmographer
My pleasure, N. :heart:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our “Pick of the Day”. It is featured in a news article here: [link] and on our main page.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Holy crap! Thank you so much, I'm honoured :heart:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
You are quite welcome! :heart:
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retransmission Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012   Traditional Artist
You are very well described your mood in this poem! I think you got a great influence!
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much, D. Your thoughtful comments mean a lot to me. :hug:
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