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The sections are scattered,
Behind mouse-doors,
Little secret crumbs
That we all miss,
That we all misplace.

I've always been a curious person,
An eye-hole watcher,
A treasure hunter,
The jigsaw queen!

Before I found a womb to grow in
I lived there –
Where all the pieces fit,
Whole as a fresh egg
Sitting in a Cleopatra milk-bath.

There I was,
Forgetting myself
Into memories,
How they tinkle in my mind
Like an old music box,
A cuckoo clock,
Or a midnight owl,
Hooting out old skeleton songs
Into a surreal forever
Fitting into micro moments
Of déjà vu.
coming back to the spirit and timelessness
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
A lovely piece. Wonderful job.
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :heart:
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
You're welcome. :aww:
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OLoboCanta Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
"Before I found a womb to grow in
I lived there –
Where all the pieces fit,"

"There I was,
Forgetting myself
Into memories,"

I really love those two concepts!
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
so glad to see that :hug: Thank you, dear xx
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012   Writer
"Micro moments of deja vu"! You feel them too? The facade of reality that ripples in a heatwave every so often? And you find yourself in the same calendar, on the same day as a million times before, trying to catch up with the reason why you did what you're doing? Haha, sorry. Got carried away. Your poetry does that to me. :heart::heart:
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
omg - you should use that in our collab! effing amazing!
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012   Writer
hehe, ok! or you can. ;)

:heart:
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think I will haha :hug:
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retransmission Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012   Traditional Artist
Many great associations and images! "Sitting in a Cleopatra milk-bath" is my favorite line:)
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